This is a quick read, and a quick moving story. Bev is a great character because she seems confident and funny. The writing style made it very easy to read, and I enjoyed it. The story ends very abruptly though, and left me not understanding what was going through Bev's mind at that point... I will be reading part 2! I found some of the descriptions a little too crude for my taste, but overall, I liked reading this short story.